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My life has become a haze
And I have forgotten my namesake
Who am I in the darkest hours of the day?

There's a little girl who walks down the road
Making mistakes I try to correct
And she looks too much like me

A little boy watches her go
He laughs at her
But in the end, there's nothing left of him

Who are you in the darkest hours of the day?
I really love this one...
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WhiteRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This one sounds like it could be part of a longer thing(?)
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DeadlyPen Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student Writer
No not really, but I could consider it...
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WhiteRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It just seems that way to me is all.
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DeadlyPen Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student Writer
It's possible... I did feel like it needed a bit more, but I wasn't sure...
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WhiteRose98 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I think it'd be cool if you continued it.
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ICanMakeAFist Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student General Artist
Excellent! *claps hands*
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DeadlyPen Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012  Student Writer
Awww, pshha~! Thanks
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ICanMakeAFist Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Quite welcome :)
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bluejay37 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is so dark and captivating :blackrose: I love this!
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DeadlyPen Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
:D Thank you~!
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