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My heart burst into a million shards of glass
And you tried to pick them up one by one
Did you not care that you cut yourself?

Drops of blood fell from your fingertips
As I watched you pathetically, laying on the floor
Why did you love me so much?

A single stumble - you fell breaking the shards even worst
But you, my beautiful darling, kept on going
Are you not tired of me?

Try putting me back together
And I come back
But what is life without you?
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WhiteRose98 Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice... Love it!
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DeadlyPen Nov 22, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks, dear~!
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WhiteRose98 Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem~!
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ICanMakeAFist Nov 20, 2012  Student General Artist
I don't really like poetry affiliated with love, but this struck me anyways.... strange
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DeadlyPen Nov 20, 2012  Student Writer
Really? Thank you, I shall take that as a compliment~! :D
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ICanMakeAFist Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha you should it was very good
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DeadlyPen Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
I've just realized that my poems have taken on a romantic turn... I must change this! I dislike when people only write lovey dovey poems and I will not become a hypocrite!
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ICanMakeAFist Nov 21, 2012  Student General Artist
Haha it's not a bad thing! It's just a personal preference.
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DeadlyPen Nov 21, 2012  Student Writer
I know, but I refuse to fill my gallery of lovey-lovey things. You have brought it to my attention and I thank you =P
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ICanMakeAFist Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome, but only do that if you actually don't like those things! You should post anything you want regardless of my preferences.
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